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Sunday, February 15, 2009

snowflakes

snowflakes
a sidewalk vendor
scrapes his griddle
[First published in White Lotus]

14 Comments:

Blogger Devika said...

Good one, Bill

wishes,
devika

7:51 AM  
Blogger John McDonald said...

enjoyed Bill
john

3:18 PM  
Blogger Masago said...

Ha! Very good.

5:08 PM  
Blogger Magyar said...

Nice... did I see this somewhere else, other that White Lotus_?

With apologies, some self-promo... magyar-haiku.blogspot.com

8:20 PM  
Blogger jem said...

Great contrast of hot and cold. And very atmospheric, not the sort of scene I'd encounter here, therefore all the more pleasing to read.

4:58 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

nice one bill

much love
gillena

5:25 AM  
Blogger gautami tripathy said...

Like the contrast here..

8:17 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Devika, John, and Vaughn. Magyar, I posted a draft of this in a workshop setting; don't know if you could have seen it there. It's also always possible that someone else has worked with a similar image. Thanks for the information about your site. Thanks, jem: it's a familiar New York street scene. And thanks to gillena and Gautami.

9:12 AM  
Blogger polona said...

love the sentiment in this one.

10:49 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, polona.

8:34 PM  
Anonymous Haiku Poems said...

humble hut~
the guardian fangs
of icicles

12:51 AM  
Blogger Tikkis said...

A thirsty child
eating
white snowflakes

3:01 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Well, tikkis, I'm glad they're white.

8:51 PM  
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