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Sunday, January 18, 2009

skaters' waltz

the spectators

stomp their feet

[First published, in a slightly different version, in Sketchbook]

Masago said...: Interesting contrast (been there in both roles). :-); 7:57 PM
John McDonald said...: enjoyed Bill
john; 12:49 AM
Devika Jyothi said...: Unfamiliar scene, so to say

trying to imagine :)

wishes,
devika; 8:33 AM
Bill said...: That's what I was going for, Vaughn.

Thanks, John.

Where there's ice, there's cold,Devika.

Thanks for the comments.; 9:31 AM
Magyar said...: Bill.
_Cold feet or not, were the stomps in 3/4 time?
_m; 9:49 AM
Bill said...: magyar, I have an Irishman's sense of rhythm.; 6:47 PM
haiku-shelf (Angelika Wienert) said...: It works!
Nice contrast!; 3:14 AM
Tikkis said...: Somehow Walzing Mathilda and WWII in Europe in my mind... But Walzing Mathilda is an Australian song :-)

Anyway; peace, Bill!; 3:32 AM
Bill said...: It's a good song, too, tikkis.; 10:25 AM