rush
a rush of starlings
over the highway . . .
the things I don't know
[First published in Ambrosia]
posted by Bill | 1:58 PM
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17 Comments:
Yes, a muse that comes when sighting these creatures.
lovely one this.
stars burnt out
above
I still don't know
Wondering what got them going got me wondering. Thanks, Vaughn, Juliet, and gautami.
Knowing it all
I gaze the sky
Father smiles from a little star
Good one, Bill
I had such a state long before; but then, I am a kind that probes...
wishes,
devika
Here happens haiku!
Bill, the father whom I mentioned in that verse is my own father, not the code--'father' (Godfather?)that went in many a comment earlier here..
I lost my father in 2003.I used to upset him so much with my ways, but he would smile at me in the end :)
wishes,
devika
Blessings, Devika. Thanks for sharing.
Angelika, my deepest thanks.
my sentiments so often when i observe the nature...
It can be a humbling experience, polona.
So true.
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Good to hear from you, Pat.
mine .. written in June 2008
a rush
of leaves fall --
sparrows
they are very different pieces of course .. >>> Gina
And yours is very good, Gina. I posted the first draft of mine at the AHA forum in May 2007. It was later rejected by several publications. Then I added the ellipsis, and it was snapped right up.
Great connection. I think birds often leave me feeling a little inadequate - perhaps its because they can fly, and see places from heights I will never achieve.
Thanks, jem. I just wondered what had got the critters going, and then, I began to reflect on how many things I don't know.
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