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Monday, February 16, 2009

hand in hand

I just posted this at Nathan's blog, in response to and inspired by a poem of his:

hand in hand . . .
they talk about
boundaries

17 Comments:

Blogger Nathan said...

I love it!

12:13 PM  
Blogger haiku-shelf (Angelika Wienert) said...

I like this senryĆ» very much!

1:07 PM  
Blogger Devika Jyothi said...

Boundaries -- the limits to which one can take -- has been in my mind in the past days...

Good one, Bill
i get the meaning here..lovers of our prime times did that :)

wishes,
devika

5:44 PM  
Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

very nice!

8:14 PM  
Blogger John McDonald said...

good one Bill
john

1:02 AM  
Blogger Magyar said...

A fine response to Nathan's good poetry, Bill

6:24 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, all. I get a lot of inspiration from my friends' blogs.

7:56 AM  
Blogger gautami tripathy said...

Like it, Bill.

And I am going to write a poem as suggested by you on my blog.

9:25 AM  
Blogger polona said...

this one takes me so many places...

10:51 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Gautami. Glad to hear it.

Thanks, polona.

8:35 PM  
Blogger Devika Jyothi said...

came for a new one, Bill

see later :)

wishes,
devika

5:28 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

withering
berry by berry
the mistletoe

12:51 AM  
Blogger jem said...

A lot of wisdom there. Knowing when to build them, when to break them. Very good.

4:11 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Oh, my first day really checking out your blog. Wonderful blog! I love this one.

12:58 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Alison. Great to hear from you.

3:11 PM  
Blogger Tikkis said...

Thnaks for Nathan's link!

mess of words
we are writing together --
adding any dots

3:31 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

You're welcome, tikkis.

8:52 PM  

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