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A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

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Wednesday, October 05, 2005

jewels

she loves the ring
his surreptitious glance
at the price tag

5 Comments:

Blogger floots said...

a gem
carat on a stick
multi-faceted

- bad puns: take your pick. I got a million of 'em. This is a lovely moment. I wonder where you saw it, or is it purely fictional?
(Enjoyed the previous post too.)
Cheers

6:20 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Floots: I've taken a few surreptitious glances in my time, but the senryu is not based on a specific experience. Thanks for your comment.

7:28 AM  
Blogger Patry Francis said...

Oh, this is a sly one. I think we're seeing another facet of Bill. I like it.

8:13 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks for your response, Patry. Another facet or two couldn't hurt.

9:01 PM  
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