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A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

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Haiku is to poetry as espresso is to coffee.

Sunday, September 11, 2005

New York: 9/11/2005

twin towers
repeating their absence
today

5 Comments:

Blogger Anonymous Poet said...

Haunting succinctness.

Emptiness captured in three lines.

7:25 PM  
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7:34 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks for your response and remarks, anon. Deeply appreciated.

8:20 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

This is pretty remarkable in how much it captures in 10 syllables.

1:41 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, anon and uao; your comments greatly appreciated.

8:19 PM  

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