A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

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Haiku is to poetry as espresso is to coffee.

Sunday, August 21, 2005


twenty years together
our hands touch as evening
claims the sky


Anonymous Jonathan said...

That's very fine, Bill. I don't know that I've read another poem as short as this that moves so beautifully through time -- I mean its meaning and ambiguities unfold surprisingly as it progresses.

2:40 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Jonathan, your thoughtful and sensitive comment is much appreciated.

3:39 PM  
Blogger Anonymous Poet said...

I echo Jonathan's sentiment. Wonderful.

8:51 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, anon.

9:54 AM  
Blogger floots said...

You've been very productive. I loved this. The mixture of the intimate and the universal is seamless and therefore doubly effective. Great

11:27 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, floots. Your comments are always illuminating.

6:00 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

The sky sumbits
the circulation touch
hot and cold air


I love your haiku it makes me think and write

12:35 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks for your visit and comment, Nasra.

6:57 AM  
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7:38 AM  

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