haiku-usa

A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

Haiku is to poetry as espresso is to coffee.

Sunday, August 21, 2005

twenty years together

our hands touch as evening

claims the sky

(8/10/05)

Anonymous said...: That's very fine, Bill. I don't know that I've read another poem as short as this that moves so beautifully through time -- I mean its meaning and ambiguities unfold surprisingly as it progresses.; 2:40 PM
Bill said...: Jonathan, your thoughtful and sensitive comment is much appreciated.; 3:39 PM
Anonymous Poet said...: I echo Jonathan's sentiment. Wonderful.; 8:51 PM
Bill said...: Thanks, anon.; 9:54 AM
floots said...: You've been very productive. I loved this. The mixture of the intimate and the universal is seamless and therefore doubly effective. Great; 11:27 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, floots. Your comments are always illuminating.; 6:00 PM
Anonymous said...: The sky sumbits
the circulation touch
hot and cold air

www.iamnasra.blogspot.com

I love your haiku it makes me think and write; 12:35 AM
Bill said...: Thanks for your visit and comment, Nasra.; 6:57 AM