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Sunday, August 21, 2005

anniversary

twenty years together
our hands touch as evening
claims the sky
(8/10/05)

9 Comments:

Anonymous Jonathan said...

That's very fine, Bill. I don't know that I've read another poem as short as this that moves so beautifully through time -- I mean its meaning and ambiguities unfold surprisingly as it progresses.

2:40 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Jonathan, your thoughtful and sensitive comment is much appreciated.

3:39 PM  
Blogger Anonymous Poet said...

I echo Jonathan's sentiment. Wonderful.

8:51 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, anon.

9:54 AM  
Blogger floots said...

You've been very productive. I loved this. The mixture of the intimate and the universal is seamless and therefore doubly effective. Great

11:27 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, floots. Your comments are always illuminating.

6:00 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

The sky sumbits
the circulation touch
hot and cold air


www.iamnasra.blogspot.com

I love your haiku it makes me think and write

12:35 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks for your visit and comment, Nasra.

6:57 AM  
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7:38 AM  

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