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Saturday, July 23, 2005

on the other hand

The post before this one took a jaundiced view of a certain kind of marriage. This one introduces a variation on the theme. Marriages, even the good ones, can take many forms.

thirty years married
ready to share
the day's bickering

8 Comments:

Blogger floots said...

Welcome back. Nice turnaround - and a lot of truth in both.

3:04 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, floots, for the comment and the welcome.

4:10 PM  
Blogger Renee Wagemans said...

Nice poem

11:13 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, poems and writings. Drop in again.

11:57 AM  
Blogger Anonymous Poet said...

The same topic, in a slightly different light. Interesting contrast.

Thanks also for the comment and poem on my site.

Re your suggestion to try new forms, here is an experiment:


Haiku

Spare words
turn quickly
like the seasons.


What do you think?

7:30 PM  
Blogger Martin Tiller said...

I'm not even married a year, and I can relate to that very nice poem. :)

7:18 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks for dropping in, Martin, and best wishes on your marriage

8:04 PM  
Blogger indonesianegriku said...

thank's for sharing info,..!
Kerja Keras Adalah Energi Kita
INDONESIA BUMIKU

7:39 AM  

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