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A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

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Haiku is to poetry as espresso is to coffee.

Tuesday, September 20, 2005

following

autumn evening
following my shadow
into the shadows

4 Comments:

Blogger floots said...

Beautiful simply as a piece of naturalistic description and made even stronger by its "intimations of mortality."

9:29 AM  
Blogger Patry Francis said...

floots said it. I can only concur.

8:25 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, floots and patry. And, floots, you comment tells me my intention got across, gratifying to know. The knowledge that what I write will be read by sensitive readers like you two is a great motivator.

8:43 PM  
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7:26 AM  

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