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Tuesday, September 13, 2005

new car

new car
she takes her cell phone
for a spin

8 Comments:

Blogger floots said...

You've met my daughter then?

11:19 PM  
Blogger Bluesky_Liz said...

Cell phones and cars. I think cell phones are becoming the real companions of people these days.

I hope that character in your haiku is not talking on it while she's trying out her new car...

4:05 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

floots: Everyman's daughter, I suspect. And, Liz, I hate to be the bearer of bad news, but, yes, she was talking on her cell phone and driving at the same time, which is against the law around here. That's the sight that inspired the senryu.

7:47 AM  
Blogger Patry Francis said...

Yes, definitely my daughter, too--and occasionally, though not often, even me.

11:00 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Patry: And you didn't have to tell us that.

2:22 PM  
Blogger Anonymous Poet said...

Very funny!

Here's one in return:

New handbag
She takes her cell phone
For a walk

7:24 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Anon: I like your senryu.

8:18 PM  
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7:32 AM  

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