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Monday, May 20, 2013

steam

steam in the shower
her naked hand
on my back

Posted as a comment at Iris's blog.

http://iris-haiku.blogspot.com/

I'll be cooling off for a few days.  See you next week.

7 Comments:

Blogger Danièle Duteil said...

Sequence emotion and chills!

6:30 AM  
Blogger Adelaide said...

steamy, anyway you read this

Adelaide

7:11 AM  
Blogger Warren said...

Terrific poem, Bill - as always, if I might say. Cool off - and come back renewed.

Warren

8:40 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thank you, Daniele, Adelaide, and Warren.

The cold shower helped.

3:13 PM  
Blogger Monika said...

Good love poem ! Love it !

10:55 AM  
Blogger Monika said...

Another great love poem, as I read it !

11:14 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Monka: Thank you. Thank you.

1:18 PM  

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