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A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

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Tuesday, April 30, 2013

spring sky . . .

a cloud parting

from itself

First published in kernels

polona said...: fresh and relatable, anyone who enjoys cloud watching will like this :-); 3:29 PM
Tikkis said...: Yesterday we got some rain and cool. Today a bright sun!

First of May -
a pair of white clouds
divorced; 11:01 PM
Crafty Green Poet said...: I love wathcing the clouds in a spring sky...; 8:17 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, polona, tikkis, and Juliet.; 11:27 AM
Warren said...: I love the visuals of this one, Bill - so much to see in clouds, besides shapes. Highlights, shadows and the depth of the inner cloud if one really looks. You are a master with words, my friend.

Warren; 3:19 PM
Bill said...: Thank you, Warren.; 11:57 AM
jem said...: So fragile and beautiful and sad and comforting all in one. A very tender yet everyday moment.; 3:08 AM
Bill said...: I'm glad this works for you, Jem, and I appreciate your reading.; 5:37 AM
Adelaide said...: I missed this before, Bill. A wonderful description of movement in the sky.

Adelaide; 6:22 AM