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Tuesday, April 30, 2013

spring sky

spring sky . . .
a cloud parting
from itself

First published in kernels


Blogger polona said...

fresh and relatable, anyone who enjoys cloud watching will like this :-)

3:29 PM  
Blogger Tikkis said...

Yesterday we got some rain and cool. Today a bright sun!

First of May -
a pair of white clouds

11:01 PM  
Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

I love wathcing the clouds in a spring sky...

8:17 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, polona, tikkis, and Juliet.

11:27 AM  
Blogger Warren said...

I love the visuals of this one, Bill - so much to see in clouds, besides shapes. Highlights, shadows and the depth of the inner cloud if one really looks. You are a master with words, my friend.


3:19 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thank you, Warren.

11:57 AM  
Blogger jem said...

So fragile and beautiful and sad and comforting all in one. A very tender yet everyday moment.

3:08 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

I'm glad this works for you, Jem, and I appreciate your reading.

5:37 AM  
Blogger Adelaide said...

I missed this before, Bill. A wonderful description of movement in the sky.


6:22 AM  

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