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Tuesday, April 02, 2013

down time . . .

a caterpillar

changes direction

Second place, Shiki Monthly Kukai, March 2013

Warren said...: This is sooo terrific, Bill - god, you make me jealous at times. I must strive even more. Thanks for sharing your talent, my friend.

Warren; 3:11 PM
Magyar said...: __Competing against one's self, that often needed -change of direction- may illuminate an obverse quality; well, my inept reading of your good lines.

__Nice, Bill. _m; 7:25 PM
Bill said...: Ah, Warren, sometimes I wonder who you're talking about. But thanks.

Doug, I think your readings are ept. Thanks.; 4:54 AM
Monika said...: Oh yes, this is a very good one, Bill !If caterpillars are able to, we are.; 5:58 AM
polona said...: this says much about life in general but also about the relation between the observer and the observed, between instinct and intellect, and more...; 12:03 PM
Bill said...: Thanks, Monika and Polona, for those thoughtful and perceptive readings.; 6:07 PM
Danaelle said...: A very strong haïku !; 6:58 AM
Adelaide said...: We all could use some down time to think about our lives,and, perhaps, change our direction.

Adelaide; 7:22 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, Daniele and Adelaide. Good observation, Adelaide.; 10:24 AM

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