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Thursday, May 16, 2013

in my dream

you answer

Left as a comment at Juliet's blog

polona said...: deceptively simple but the pivot adds depth... love it.; 12:24 PM
jem said...: Lovely - and so much room to find my own way through it. Juliet's blog seems to inspire great things in you! Hurrah for our little community.; 1:37 AM
Henrique Pimenta said...: bem sugestivo

som e sonho; 7:25 AM
Frank... said...: A haiku with a llot to think abour. Nice one, Bill...; 10:57 AM
moondustwriter said...: ah a simple beauty with depth of feeling

carressed by a word
simple thoughts thrown to the wind
butterflies take flight; 1:52 PM
Iris said...: fine, fine, fine
I have read 3 times :)
best regads; 12:32 AM
Bill said...: Thank you, polona. It was when I noticed the pivot (which arrived unexpectedly) that I thought I might have a haiku.

Hurrah, indeed, jem, and I'm glad you're in it.

Thank you, Henrique.

Glad you think so, Frank.

Welcome, moondustwriter, and thanks.; 10:43 AM
Bill said...: Iris, your comment is deeply appreciated.; 10:44 AM
Adelaide said...: I echo everyone's comment.
A good pivot with much meaning.

Adelaide; 6:46 PM
Bill said...: Thank you, Adelaide.; 7:56 AM
Crafty Green Poet said...: Wonderful pivot in this one!; 4:57 AM

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