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Thursday, May 16, 2013

a bird calls

a bird calls
in my dream
you answer

Left as a comment at Juliet's blog


Blogger polona said...

deceptively simple but the pivot adds depth... love it.

12:24 PM  
Blogger jem said...

Lovely - and so much room to find my own way through it. Juliet's blog seems to inspire great things in you! Hurrah for our little community.

1:37 AM  
Blogger Henrique Pimenta said...

bem sugestivo

som e sonho

7:25 AM  
Blogger Frank... said...

A haiku with a llot to think abour. Nice one, Bill...

10:57 AM  
Blogger moondustwriter said...

ah a simple beauty with depth of feeling

carressed by a word
simple thoughts thrown to the wind
butterflies take flight

1:52 PM  
Blogger Iris said...

fine, fine, fine
I have read 3 times :)
best regads

12:32 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thank you, polona. It was when I noticed the pivot (which arrived unexpectedly) that I thought I might have a haiku.

Hurrah, indeed, jem, and I'm glad you're in it.

Thank you, Henrique.

Glad you think so, Frank.

Welcome, moondustwriter, and thanks.

10:43 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Iris, your comment is deeply appreciated.

10:44 AM  
Blogger Adelaide said...

I echo everyone's comment.
A good pivot with much meaning.


6:46 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thank you, Adelaide.

7:56 AM  
Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

Wonderful pivot in this one!

4:57 AM  

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