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A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.
Friday, March 15, 2013
I like this one by Frank Williams. You can access his blog by clicking on "Frank Williams" in the list to the left
bitter wind . . .
we take refuge
in a betting shop
I was motivated to this response, based on how things were with me 35+ years ago:
sudden rain
I look for a bar
to stay dry in
It's a special kind of pleasure when another poet's work inspires my own.
8 Comments:
Thanks for that Bill. Your poem is a very nice response to mine...
nice one Bill
john
Both poems, Frank's and yours, terrific!
Warren
i like both poems. something many can relate to...
Nice ! Each one his kind of pleasure.
A pleasure, Frank.
John, Warren, polona, and Daniele, thank you. Glad my effort doesn't look too shabby next to Frank's.
Two good haiku, nice to see them side by side
Thank you, Juliet.
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