haiku-usa: sleepless

Tuesday, April 13, 2010

the changing rhythms

of the rain

[Recently posted at gautami's blog]

Frank... said...: Everything is accentuated when one can't sleep - nice post, Bill...; 11:38 AM
Magyar said...: ... the cat purrs.
Comfortable, Bill.; 3:35 PM
Gina said...: lovely ....for me the changing rhythms echo the restless turning over in our sleeplessness >>> Gina; 7:25 PM
John McDonald said...: yes nice one Bill
john; 2:58 AM
Bill said...: I was trying to catch an experience that might be at once soothing (as Doug's comment suggests) and irritating (something along the lines of Gina's comment), certainly intense (as Frank notes), so I'm pleased with the range of responses here. And thanks to John for those kind words.; 6:46 PM
Monika said...: Yes, good one, again ! (So, you overcame the writer's block... )

My first thought on reading your haïku was : But rain is better than snow, isn't it ? ;-); 7:08 AM
Daniel Dragomirescu said...: Nice!
Daniel D. Peaceman, writer and editor; 1:13 PM
floots said...: too true
it's amazing what insomnia does for the senses
enabling one to capture everything (except sleep) cheers; 12:49 AM
Crafty Green Poet said...: excellent!; 2:46 AM
Gillena Cox said...: we got some this morning :)

much love
gillena; 8:48 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, Monika. They come and they go: both blocks and good ones.

Daniel, a pleasure to meet you. Thanks for the visit.

Floots, old friend, great to hear from you.

Thank you, Juliet.

Good news, Gillena. You're in my prayers.; 8:23 PM

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