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Sunday, January 13, 2008

between

between my winter hat
and my winter collar
winter wind

16 Comments:

Anonymous . . . GABI said...

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I like the way you use WINTER threeeee times here, makes it feel much colder than just a simple WINTER !

Keep warm, dear Bill san !

GABI

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11:38 PM  
Blogger floots said...

i agree with gabi
the wind seems able to find any crevice
thank you

12:21 AM  
Blogger Richard Kay said...

Bbbrrrr! I can feel it from here Bill.

1:06 AM  
Blogger Tikkis said...

wintry wind
doesn't use any scarfs --
this year's wintry fashion?

3:19 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks gabi, floots, and Richard.

Tikkis, take "winter collar" as coat + collar + scarf + hunched shoulders--and still the wind finds a way!

7:14 AM  
Blogger polona said...

very effective repetition of 'winter'... i can feel the cold biting into my flesh...

1:05 PM  
Blogger Masago said...

I agree too.

5:43 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, polona and vaughn. Now get yourselves a nice cup of cocoa.

6:02 PM  
Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

the wind always seem to find its way in!

8:51 PM  
Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

very cold, reminds me of whats waiting for me when I leave the building!

6:29 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Full disclosure: It's been a pretty mild winter around here for the most part.

Thanks, Andrew and Juliet.

6:49 AM  
OpenID quotesqueen said...

Love this. Wow. Haiku is so powerful.

3:34 PM  
Blogger Inside our hands, outside our hearts said...

I say bring a scarf...smiles. This is simple and nice. Thank you.

T

5:12 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, qq and T.

7:42 PM  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

I feel it!!!

4:42 PM  
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6:30 AM  

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