haiku-usa

A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

Haiku is to poetry as espresso is to coffee.

Saturday, January 05, 2008

petals as white

as an empty page

The Site Administrator said...: Brilliant!; 6:43 PM
polona said...: perfect!; 10:20 AM
floots said...: superb
thank you; 2:06 PM
Bill said...: Well, I guess you guys liked this one. Thanks.; 7:41 PM
Crafty Green Poet said...: yes, I like this one too!; 1:08 AM
Tikkis said...: Ah Bill, a gardener!

... Just read some writings about Mr Narcissus... ;-) I do love the whiteness of an empty paper; then I spoil it with my writings ;-(

Trying to:

My best haiku
I ever wrote on any paper --
this white paper!; 1:11 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, juliet.

Tikkis, the question is, who's in charge-you or the paper?; 8:23 AM
Tikkis said...: Ah, Bill, you got the point! Who is reading the text through my eyes? Perhaps just that's why I were often write something on white papers? ;-); 10:01 AM
Tikkis said...: hopsanhei: were read very, please!; 10:03 AM
Pat Paulk said...: I agree with RK, brillant!!; 6:36 AM
Bill said...: tikkis, read as instructed.

Pat, thanks.; 8:13 PM