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Saturday, January 05, 2008

narcissus

narcissus
petals as white
as an empty page

12 Comments:

Blogger Richard Kay said...

Brilliant!

6:43 PM  
Blogger polona said...

perfect!

10:20 AM  
Blogger floots said...

superb
thank you

2:06 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Well, I guess you guys liked this one. Thanks.

7:41 PM  
Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

yes, I like this one too!

1:08 AM  
Blogger Tikkis said...

Ah Bill, a gardener!

... Just read some writings about Mr Narcissus... ;-) I do love the whiteness of an empty paper; then I spoil it with my writings ;-(

Trying to:

My best haiku
I ever wrote on any paper --
this white paper!

1:11 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, juliet.

Tikkis, the question is, who's in charge-you or the paper?

8:23 AM  
Blogger Tikkis said...

Ah, Bill, you got the point! Who is reading the text through my eyes? Perhaps just that's why I were often write something on white papers? ;-)

10:01 AM  
Blogger Tikkis said...

hopsanhei: were read very, please!

10:03 AM  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

I agree with RK, brillant!!

6:36 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

tikkis, read as instructed.

Pat, thanks.

8:13 PM  
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