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Tuesday, December 20, 2005

sun on the snow

sun on the snow
a seagull's cry
pierces the morning

5 Comments:

Blogger Denis said...

This works really well because the stark imagery is starkly written. A successful "objective correlative." Very lovely ku.

bw,
Denis

9:38 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thank you, Denis. "Objective correlative" is a pretty good way of stating what I was going for in this one.

8:12 PM  
Blogger . Gabi Greve said...

Nice one, Bill.
Makes me smell the sea !

Greetings from lots of snow in Japan

GABI
. Happy Haiku Gallery .

3:51 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Hi Gabi. Thanks for your visit and your comment. Don't let the snow snow you under.

6:39 AM  
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7:21 AM  

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