haiku-usa

A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

Haiku is to poetry as espresso is to coffee.

Sunday, December 18, 2005

headlights drift

through snow

Patry Francis said...: This poem makes me think of nights when I'm waiting anxiously for someone to come home, watching the headlights sweep past.; 8:46 PM
Bill said...: Thanks, patry. It's always interesting to learn what sort of reaction my poems have triggered. The particular anxiety you mention was not in my mind as I composed this, but it's entirely consistent with what I wrote.; 9:16 AM
floots said...: beautifully succinct and so effective
i had a night drive through snow recently but can't get the words/form together
here's hoping your words will be both a helping hand and a kick up the rear
cheers; 11:08 AM
Anonymous Poet said...: Coming back from a big Holiday party?; 4:22 PM
Bill said...: Thanks floots. Hope it does help.

Anon: Your guess is as good as mine.; 7:32 PM
Bill said...: Thanks, Denis. I like your reading of this.; 8:13 PM