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Saturday, November 26, 2005

biting

biting wind
a puppy dances
with the leaves

10 Comments:

Blogger dustin said...

beautiful.

9:17 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Dustin

8:22 AM  
Blogger T.A.T. said...

enjoyed reading your site.

1:43 PM  
Blogger Denis said...

Bill,

I like that line one can be taken two ways; great economy of words. A fine image--the puppy and the leaves dancing together--life and death in a tango. Very nice haiku!

bw,
Denis
Haiku Unchained

3:44 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

denis: thanks for taking the trouble to articulate your response so fully. And thanks, t.a.t., for your visit and your comment.

8:46 PM  
Blogger Anonymous Poet said...

What kind of puppy, may I ask?

Is it doing a particular dance?

: )

7:31 PM  
Blogger bigshoulders said...

very nice haiku, bill. i think that's what draws me to try to write them myself...seeing folks such as yourself convey so much meaning with scant few words. it's a challenge, which i will return to...

thanks again for the read.

kevin

6:57 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

anon: puppy is interacting gracefully with leaves blown by the wind--hence, "dances."

10:02 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks for your comment, Kevin, and good luck with your haiku.

10:07 AM  
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7:23 AM  

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