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A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

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Haiku is to poetry as espresso is to coffee.

Monday, November 14, 2005

cafe

waiting for you
at the sidewalk cafe
half moon

13 Comments:

Blogger floots said...

this is a sparkling sixgun of a piece
didn't even see you draw
but it hits the spot
romantic
evocative
naturalistic
(I know I've said it before, but I bet youknew this one was right as soon as you finished it.
(thanks for the visit)

10:35 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Right, floots. This one felt good all the way, and I've received a lot of positive feedback on it.

11:35 AM  
Blogger Judy Kamilhor said...

This one has stayed with me. It's somehow hesitant and hopeful. And thanks for the wonderful comment on my haiku set. Kami.

12:16 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Kami. I love the way you've articulated the tone. And your blog is first-rate.

6:58 AM  
Blogger Anonymous Poet said...

Who's the special someone?

7:06 PM  
Blogger Anonymous Poet said...

BTW, thank you for adding me to your blogroll. That is a very nice compliment!

7:13 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Anon: For me, the woman always worth waiting for is my wife Pat, but the poem is open as to who's who. And you're welcome re: your blog, to which, as you know, I'm a frequent visitor.

8:19 PM  
Blogger kara said...

What a nice image/moment.

12:56 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Kara

4:38 PM  
Blogger Anonymous Poet said...

Bill: re your comment that this poem has a particular meaning for you, but is open to any one else reading, that is the same approach I took with "Defiant." That way, a reader can relate his/her own experiences or feelings to the text of the poem.

7:31 AM  
Blogger Keith P. Stieneke said...

I think all of your haiku is great. Possibly you'd post some of it in my poetry forum at
http://poetry-and-prose.activeboard.com/

I have a special section for Haiku.

11:35 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Keith: Thanks for the comment and the invitation.

4:28 PM  
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