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Friday, November 04, 2005

gathering

gathering my thoughts
dry leaves carry the wind
around the courtyard

3 Comments:

Blogger floots said...

"To see life more clearly, we must stand it on its head," says Conflootsius.
It's amazing how that little wind/leaves reversal has such an effect. Nice one.

11:14 PM  
Blogger shyloh's poetry said...

Very nice work. I have enjoyed the read.

6:31 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thank you, floots. Are the leaves in the wind or is the wind in the leaves?
And thank you shyloh. I hope you'll drop by again.

9:07 PM  

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