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Thursday, October 20, 2005

high buildings

cityscape
towers of cloud
in the autumn rain

6 Comments:

Blogger floots said...

towers of cloud is a great image. It showed me the clouds but also the urban skyline - emphasising its ephemeral quality and, perhaps the way in which the works/existence of man are subjugated by the weather, the seasons.

10:28 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Great reading, Floots. The toughest part of writing this was getting the first line right. Your comment about the skyline is just what I was going for, and that I was afraid I couldn't get.

11:48 AM  
Blogger Judy Kamilhor said...

Bill,

Beautiful! I agree that the skyline suggestion makes this work really well. And thanks for adding my blog to your links section. I'll return the favor.

Kami

2:37 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Kami. For some reason, this one means a lot to me personally, and I'm delighted that it works for you.

5:43 PM  
Blogger Anonymous Poet said...

Wonderful. Evocative.

7:12 PM  
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