post coitum
after making love
the draft
from an open window
posted by Bill | 4:14 PM
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11 Comments:
i'll have a draft beer to that
What a moment!
Bill's fabulous freeze-frame strikes again. Beautiful.
Shane: It's on me. Floots: "freeze-frame" is a great image. Thanks to both.
ha, I like. Sounds refreshing.
shyloh: Men are from mars, women from venus. Or something.
Much better than a smoke.
"post coitum omne animal triste" (all animals are melancholy after intercourse), says St. Augustine. Apparently, it's more complicated than that. Thanks, Patry.
Well then!
anon: I've been waiting for your take on this one.
Waiting? For me?!?!? I am so flattered.
It's definitely trademark you. It is simple, yet says so much. It is definitely tactile . . . The implied, unstated heat from your "activity," contrasted with the (ostensibly) cold draft coming from an open window. Hot and cold. All at once.
(BTW, did you ever consider closing the window? Just a thought.)
Anon: after--maybe, before--other considerations, during--no way, man!
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