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Sunday, December 11, 2005

branches

in the branches
of the artificial tree
last year's tinsel

12 Comments:

Blogger T.A.T. said...

enjoyed.

5:49 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, tat.

4:19 PM  
Blogger floots said...

deck the halls with boughs of mem'ry
(tra la lal la la etc)

10:36 AM  
Blogger bigshoulders said...

it's always a treat to see a new 'ku from you, bill. i well recall discovering ornaments that spent a year tucked away in the artificial tree.

b.s.

3:19 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, floots and bigshoulders. This one seems to have struck a chord. Pun semi-intended.

7:04 PM  
Blogger Patry Francis said...

Ah, last year's tinsel. So visual. So sad. Nice one, Bill.

8:29 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, patry.

5:40 AM  
Blogger Denis said...

A nice touch of pathos. Well done.

bw,
Denis

10:42 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thank you, Denis

5:10 PM  
Blogger Anonymous Poet said...

I can see it there, just barely hanging on . . . .

8:13 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

anon:Thanks for letting me know the image got across to you.

9:57 PM  
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