haiku-usa

A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

Haiku is to poetry as espresso is to coffee.

Tuesday, May 17, 2005

waving to a lover

already turned away

floots said...: Came to say thank you for your visit and very kind words today and found this! It's another one of the type which I love: a lot of narrative taking up a small space. I, and presumably you, can empathise so well with this. It's the moment of romantic farewell which should be set in amber - and she's already reading the menu or whatever. Collapse of stout waver. Regards.; 8:52 AM
Anonymous said...: Wow! Happy Birthday in advance!!

(^^); 12:39 PM
Bill said...: floots: Thanks for another thoughtful and articulate response. And Ticklebug, thanks for dropping in and for the good wishes.; 7:17 PM
allie said...: great image; 2:58 PM