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Wednesday, May 04, 2005

old photograph

my wife's face

before she knew mine

floots said...: Loved it. I bet you knew it was right, even as you wrote it.; 12:44 PM
Bill said...: Good insight, Floots. At least, it certainly felt right. Sometimes that happens.; 4:56 PM
Anonymous Poet said...: Lovely! I feel a stream-of-conscious nostalgia when reading this. Was it the same when you wrote it/experienced it? Or different?; 4:48 PM
Cori said...: I floated through BE.... excellent poem. I agree with floots! Great stuff!; 2:48 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, AP. Stream-of-conscious nostalgia? Sounds about right.; 1:59 PM
Bill said...: Thanks, Cori. Float by again.; 2:00 PM
shinanos said...: Came here from floots' links.
...Wonderful, I sometimes compose Haiku or Senryu too...

By a few clicks
I found the world
Around my thoughts

Senryu? Maybe...
Cheers from Japan :); 5:42 AM
Bill said...: shina310: Good to meet you; thanks for dropping in. Floots's sites are among my regular stops.; 9:01 AM
Cin said...: Delicious!

Came in through BE, and glad I did. Suddenly it gave a whole new frame of reference for all those old photos I cart around.; 7:36 AM
Bill said...: Cin: Glad you dropped in, and thanks for your comment. But does this mean that some day you'll blame me for all those pictures cluttering the attic?:); 10:27 AM

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