haiku-usa

A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

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Haiku is to poetry as espresso is to coffee.

Wednesday, May 04, 2005

photo

old photograph
my wife's face
before she knew mine

11 Comments:

Blogger floots said...

Loved it. I bet you knew it was right, even as you wrote it.

12:44 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Good insight, Floots. At least, it certainly felt right. Sometimes that happens.

4:56 PM  
Blogger Anonymous Poet said...

Lovely! I feel a stream-of-conscious nostalgia when reading this. Was it the same when you wrote it/experienced it? Or different?

4:48 PM  
Blogger Cori said...

I floated through BE.... excellent poem. I agree with floots! Great stuff!

2:48 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, AP. Stream-of-conscious nostalgia? Sounds about right.

1:59 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Cori. Float by again.

2:00 PM  
Blogger shinanos said...

Came here from floots' links.
...Wonderful, I sometimes compose Haiku or Senryu too...

By a few clicks
I found the world
Around my thoughts

Senryu? Maybe...
Cheers from Japan :)

5:42 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

shina310: Good to meet you; thanks for dropping in. Floots's sites are among my regular stops.

9:01 AM  
Blogger Cin said...

Delicious!

Came in through BE, and glad I did. Suddenly it gave a whole new frame of reference for all those old photos I cart around.

7:36 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Cin: Glad you dropped in, and thanks for your comment. But does this mean that some day you'll blame me for all those pictures cluttering the attic?:)

10:27 AM  
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