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Wednesday, October 19, 2016

gathering

gathering driftwood
she says I remind her
of someone

First published in Failed Haiku

4 Comments:

Blogger Magyar said...

My overriding query: which one of you is gathering the driftwood_?
__ The gathering of imagination. _m

6:26 AM  
Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

There's a whole story in this one.

1:23 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Both of us, as I read it. But your reading is as good as mine, Doug. Thanks.

9:52 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Juliet. That's the kind of effect I was going for.

9:53 AM  

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