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A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

: Name: Bill; Location: New York, New York

Haiku is to poetry as espresso is to coffee.

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Sunday, September 11, 2016

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wind off the harbor
waiting for the dawn

9/11/16

2 Comments:

Magyar said...: Bill, you've made me think, and that's scary! Smiles_!
__ A youngster may see someone blow out a candle, then imagine that a person blows out the sun, and makes each day become night.

Onshore winds, have blown the sun away; moonrise. _m; 6:58 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, Doug. I hoped the 2-line structure would suggest a sense of the unfinished, to-be-completed.; 5:40 AM

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