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Thursday, October 13, 2016


abandoned factory . . .
parking spaces marked

First published in Failed Haiku


Blogger Magyar said...

__ Many emblems of history are still so deeply valued today, others, however, have exceeded their time of need. Here, I see that in your verse, Bill. _m

8:17 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Doug. For me, "reserved" suggests authority and privilege, ironically, in the immediate context.

8:21 AM  
Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

I think this one works on several levels, excellent one

1:17 PM  
Blogger Gwil W said...

the banker's limo
parked somewhere
round the corner

1:03 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Juliet and Gwil.

4:31 PM  

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