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A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

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Thursday, October 13, 2016

abandoned factory . . .
parking spaces marked
Reserved

First published in Failed Haiku

Magyar said...: __ Many emblems of history are still so deeply valued today, others, however, have exceeded their time of need. Here, I see that in your verse, Bill. _m; 8:17 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, Doug. For me, "reserved" suggests authority and privilege, ironically, in the immediate context.; 8:21 AM
Crafty Green Poet said...: I think this one works on several levels, excellent one; 1:17 PM
Gwil W said...: the banker's limo
parked somewhere
round the corner; 1:03 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, Juliet and Gwil.; 4:31 PM