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Friday, March 06, 2015

alone

alone . . .
snow falling
on snow

First place, Shiki Kukai, February 2015; assigned topic: "alone"

9 Comments:

Blogger Gillena Cox said...

congrats, a lovely wabi sabi captured moment

much love...

12:16 PM  
Blogger Magyar said...

this night's snow
its noise keeps me awake
flakes clatter

Smiles!

Grand, Bill!
__Primary Poet, Best Bard, First Place, lovit! _m

1:48 PM  
Blogger haiku-shelf said...

No noise. Just whiteness and loneliness.

2:17 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks for your comments, Gillena, M, Angelika. Snow on snow is something we are having a lot of this winter.

4:53 PM  
Blogger Tikkis said...

We have an old saying in Finland:

New snow is killing an old one ...

Meaning that after a long snowy winter the snows don't melt down so easily.

But a fresh spring snowfall somehow causing old snows to disappear!

eagerly
a fresh snowfall
beating old ones



Youngsters ...

3:51 AM  
Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

lovely capture of a moment

12:33 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

No snow in the forecast! Rumors of spring! Some doubters.

Thanks, tikkis and Juliet.

7:28 AM  
Blogger Danièle Duteil said...

It remembers one of mines :

dernier jour de l'an
bientôt sur les souvenirs
d'autres souvenirs

4:22 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Excuse the delay, Daniele. I thought I had already responded. That's a fine haiku. Thanks.

12:22 PM  

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