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Friday, March 06, 2015

alone . . .

snow falling

on snow

First place, Shiki Kukai, February 2015; assigned topic: "alone"

Gillena Cox said...: congrats, a lovely wabi sabi captured moment

much love...; 12:16 PM
Magyar said...: this night's snow
its noise keeps me awake
flakes clatter

Smiles!

Grand, Bill!
__Primary Poet, Best Bard, First Place, lovit! _m; 1:48 PM
haiku-shelf (Angelika Wienert) said...: No noise. Just whiteness and loneliness.; 2:17 PM
Bill said...: Thanks for your comments, Gillena, M, Angelika. Snow on snow is something we are having a lot of this winter.; 4:53 PM
Tikkis said...: We have an old saying in Finland:

New snow is killing an old one ...

Meaning that after a long snowy winter the snows don't melt down so easily.

But a fresh spring snowfall somehow causing old snows to disappear!

eagerly
a fresh snowfall
beating old ones

Youngsters ...; 3:51 AM
Crafty Green Poet said...: lovely capture of a moment; 12:33 PM
Bill said...: No snow in the forecast! Rumors of spring! Some doubters.

Thanks, tikkis and Juliet.; 7:28 AM
Danaelle said...: It remembers one of mines :

dernier jour de l'an
bientôt sur les souvenirs
d'autres souvenirs; 4:22 AM
Bill said...: Excuse the delay, Daniele. I thought I had already responded. That's a fine haiku. Thanks.; 12:22 PM

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