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A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

Haiku is to poetry as espresso is to coffee.

Saturday, February 28, 2015

unheard melodies

in the summer wind

shadows dancing

Third place, Caribbean Kigo Kukai. A bit poetical for my taste, but I guess I was in the mood.

Crafty Green Poet said...: I like that one, and congratulations; 9:35 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, Juliet.; 7:03 PM
Gillena Cox said...: Congrats and thanks for journeying in the CKK

much love...; 4:33 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, Gillena.; 12:21 PM
Gwil W said...: Bill, If you were in Austria it would be:

unheard melodies
in the föhn
shadows dancing

which would be an amazing haiku because not only is föhn the word for the warm winds from the south, generally from the sahara, but it is also the word for a hairdryer.; 11:12 AM
Bill said...: Hmmm, let's see

unheard melodies
in the hairdryer
shadows dancing

Yep, Gwil, amazing.; 8:56 AM