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Saturday, June 22, 2013

palmist

palmist
reading the lines
in her face

First published in Modern Haiku

9 Comments:

Blogger Bouwe Brouwer said...

Nice, simple, clean and very effective.

12:07 AM  
Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

clever one,

12:14 AM  
Blogger polona said...

unexpected L3 but it makes perfect sense

9:28 AM  
Blogger Monika said...

And what are they telling, those lines ? ;-)

11:34 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks for the comments, my friends.

6:39 PM  
Blogger Frank... said...

Love the humour in this one, Bill...

5:36 AM  
Blogger Danièle Duteil said...

Yes ! A very unexpected one, Bill.

5:46 AM  
Blogger Magyar said...

__When looking back, and reading the 'changing' lines, another story.

Always, Bill. _m

5:41 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Frank, Daniele, and Doug, much appreciated.

2:50 PM  

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