haiku-usa

A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

Haiku is to poetry as espresso is to coffee.

Saturday, June 22, 2013

reading the lines

in her face

First published in Modern Haiku

bouwebrouwer said...: Nice, simple, clean and very effective.; 12:07 AM
Crafty Green Poet said...: clever one,; 12:14 AM
polona said...: unexpected L3 but it makes perfect sense; 9:28 AM
Monika said...: And what are they telling, those lines ? ;-); 11:34 AM
Bill said...: Thanks for the comments, my friends.; 6:39 PM
Frank... said...: Love the humour in this one, Bill...; 5:36 AM
Danaelle said...: Yes ! A very unexpected one, Bill.; 5:46 AM
Magyar said...: __When looking back, and reading the 'changing' lines, another story.

Always, Bill. _m; 5:41 PM
Bill said...: Frank, Daniele, and Doug, much appreciated.; 2:50 PM