haiku-usa: another spring II

Wednesday, June 19, 2013

another spring

the women

getting younger

First published in Modern Haiku

Monika said...: hahaha ! Good one, Bill ;-) I know the astonishment !; 5:59 PM
Bill said...: Thanks, Monika. Uncanny, isn't it?; 6:19 PM
Magyar said...: __That visit to the mall, a beach side stroll... or, perhaps, just scanning some fact based fiction, and we find the 'older pages,' of which we'll read more closely.
__What the dickens does that mean?

write another year
we read our older pages
this life grows more young

Ooops... couldn't help myself! Fine one Bill!!
_m; 1:57 PM
Bill said...: Thank you for that, Doug.; 8:51 PM
Crafty Green Poet said...: made me smile,; 4:56 AM
Iris said...: up-to-date :); 1:49 PM
Bill said...: Thanks, Juliet and Iris.; 4:37 PM
Adelaide said...: Don't I wish! Nice that someone thinks we are.

Adelaide; 6:13 AM
Bill said...: Adelaide, I believe that's the consensus among men my age.; 11:58 AM
polona said...: ha! in the eyes of the beholder...; 9:27 AM
Bill said...: Well, Polona, when you've been beholding as long as I have . . .; 6:44 PM
Out of Sight L said...: that's so tender and beautiful ...; 4:24 AM

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