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Wednesday, June 19, 2013

another spring II


another spring
the women
getting younger

First published in Modern Haiku

12 Comments:

Blogger Monika said...

hahaha ! Good one, Bill ;-) I know the astonishment !

5:59 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Monika. Uncanny, isn't it?

6:19 PM  
Blogger Magyar said...

__That visit to the mall, a beach side stroll... or, perhaps, just scanning some fact based fiction, and we find the 'older pages,' of which we'll read more closely.
__What the dickens does that mean?

write another year
we read our older pages
this life grows more young

Ooops... couldn't help myself! Fine one Bill!!
_m

1:57 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thank you for that, Doug.

8:51 PM  
Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

made me smile,

4:56 AM  
Blogger Iris said...

up-to-date :)

1:49 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Juliet and Iris.

4:37 PM  
Blogger Adelaide said...

Don't I wish! Nice that someone thinks we are.

Adelaide

6:13 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Adelaide, I believe that's the consensus among men my age.

11:58 AM  
Blogger polona said...

ha! in the eyes of the beholder...

9:27 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Well, Polona, when you've been beholding as long as I have . . .

6:44 PM  
Blogger Lorraine said...

that's so tender and beautiful ...

4:24 AM  

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