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Sunday, June 30, 2013

low

low tide
we leave our footprints
to the wetness

Caribbean Kigo Kukai, June 2013. Kigo: "wetness," with the requirement that the word itself must be used

10 Comments:

Blogger Monika said...

Love it! (I bet the organizers of this kigo didn't expect the word wetness used in this way ;-))

7:43 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

nice reading your haiku here as well; i do yes prefer the use of 'footprints' in Line2


much love...

11:16 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks for your comments on "high" and "low," Monika.

11:24 AM  
Blogger polona said...

as usual, this says more than appears on the surface

1:08 PM  
Blogger Magyar said...

__Some -foot prints- we leave behind on -life's beach-, we hope will never be -ebbed away-.

family
of this extended sea
the tides

__I guess, by now Bill, you know how well I like these two. _m

8:31 AM  
Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

very ecovative of visits to the beach and it says so much more too

11:00 AM  
Blogger Lorraine said...

How wonderful, here you've been all over my favourite blogs and I never visited how uncouth of me...I don't really go by any rules of methods of writing but to me 'we leave our footprints to the wetness' touches me deeply it's wonderful ...

6:47 AM  
Blogger Magyar said...

Bill!

__Low tide... rings another bell, the Nantaskets!

low tide
sea gulls hide from the sun
beach umbrellas

5:14 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thank you, polona.

Thanks, Lorraine. And welcome to my blog. Yes, I think we have been to some of the same places.

8:32 AM  
Blogger Danièle Duteil said...

wave after wave
sea rebuilds its territory
collapsed sand castles

6:17 AM  

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