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Sunday, September 18, 2011

snack

midnight snack

at the kitchen window

a bite out of the moon

First posted as a response to an original by Melissa Allen at her blog. You can see her excellent original (and, if you're not already acquainted with it, get to know her blog) by clicking on red dragonfly in the list of blogs on the home page.

8 Comments:

Tikkis said...: Midnight soon, having a visit in Lappland and half-eaten moon trying to sail as nothing special ever happening ...

time to sleep -
someone bit off
half of the moon; 12:17 PM
John McDonald said...: love it Bill
john; 12:29 AM
Ralf Bröker said...: The bite was heard. And somewhere there is the sound of a kitchen door, but psssssst ... fine haiku.

Best wishes
Ralf; 4:49 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, tikkis, John, and Ralf. Do check out Melissa's original. She's one of the best haiku poets around right now.; 11:20 AM
Gillena Cox said...: nice one Bill

much love...; 9:34 PM
Crafty Green Poet said...: Excellent; 8:20 AM
Warren said...: I thought I'd stop in today, Bill, and sure am glad I did - excellent haiku! Thanks again for sharing your talent.

Warren; 7:17 PM
Bill said...: Thanks, Gillena and Juliet.; 8:23 PM

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Sunday, September 18, 2011

snack

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