haiku-usa

A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

Haiku is to poetry as espresso is to coffee.

Wednesday, September 14, 2011

autumn memory

of those walks with my father . . .

the silences

A slightly revised version of a haiku originally posted at the Caribbean Kigo Kukai

Gillena Cox said...: this one's nice too

much love...; 11:55 AM
Adelaide said...: I sense a happy memory here, that the silences were comfortable and not because of any estrangement. A walk in autumn has a pleasant connotation.

Adelaide; 5:06 PM
John McDonald said...: hit a note of recognition for me Bill
john; 12:31 AM
Frank... said...: A wonderful jux of images, Bill...; 9:57 AM
Magyar said...: awareness
in these silent moments
harmony

Just my unnecessary echo to your fine thought. _m; 8:36 AM