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Sunday, March 06, 2011

what winter

has left us

Shiki kukai September 2010

Masago said...: I can only imagine what that is there. :-); 6:25 PM
Warren said...: Gorgeous, Bill - Few words but a world of meaning. You're the master.

Warren; 6:23 AM
Monika said...: I like this early spring haïku - conveying feelings seldom associated with spring. A wave of sadness, of sorrows for what's been left behind... very moving.; 6:55 AM
Ralf Bröker said...: There is a lot of poetry in the break between winter and spring. This break in your haiku is very short, Bill, and very deep. I like it very much.

Best wishes
Ralf; 10:43 AM
John McDonald said...: nice one Bill
john; 12:43 AM
Magyar said...: Nice.
_m; 6:47 AM
Bill said...: Thank you so much, my friiends; 9:42 AM
Gillena Cox said...: as hinted by Monika i sense a resonance of waves of sadness in your shoreline; nice one Bill; much love...; 10:08 AM
Crafty Green Poet said...: excellent, there's a whole world in that haiku; 12:18 PM
Frank... said...: A vivid haiku, Bill...; 12:42 AM
Emma Dalloway said...: hey Bill - lovely to read your words again - hope NY is treating you well.; 2:37 AM
Bill said...: Gillena and Juliet, much appreciated.; 7:49 AM
Bill said...: Frank and Dalloway, my thanks. Good to have you both back in action.; 8:51 PM
Tikkis said...: wintry sea
packed all these ices -
what for?

(In the Bay of Bothnia there are heavy pack ice and even the powerfull ice-strenghtened vessels got big problems.); 11:02 PM

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