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Thursday, August 19, 2010

northern hills

the summer begins

its long goodbye

First published in Ambrosia

haiku-shelf (Angelika Wienert) said...: That's a good haiku!

It's always interesting to see, to smell, to feel the change of the seasons. Well, it's really a "long goodbye".

Best wishes,
Angelika; 2:29 AM
Ralf Bröker said...: Good one. The sound of the last line makes me see this tapering.

Best wishes
Ralf; 2:45 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, Angelika and Ralf.; 7:57 AM
Gillena Cox said...: nice one Bill i have a view of 'The Northern Range' where i live; quite an inspiration for me too

much love
gillena; 12:20 PM
John McDonald said...: yes nice one indeed Bill
john; 12:34 AM
Frank... said...: Summer doesn't last long - nice haiku, Bill...; 2:47 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, Gillena, John, and Frank.; 8:29 AM
Magyar said...: Remarkably fitting! _m; 4:22 PM
Bill said...: Thanks, Doug. I just spent a week in the Berkshires, in northwestern Massachusetts, where, if you looked closely, the haiku way, you could see the signs I am talking about. The poem itself was written a while back and is based on earlier visits.; 6:49 AM
Area 17 said...: Breaktakingly beautiful.

all my best,

Alan
The With Words International Online Haiku Competition 2010: With Words
.; 5:10 PM
Bill said...: Much appreciated, Alan. Thanks for the visit.; 6:38 AM

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