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Thursday, August 19, 2010

hills

northern hills
the summer begins
its long goodbye

First published in Ambrosia

11 Comments:

Blogger haiku-shelf said...

That's a good haiku!

It's always interesting to see, to smell, to feel the change of the seasons. Well, it's really a "long goodbye".

Best wishes,
Angelika

2:29 AM  
Blogger Ralf Bröker said...

Good one. The sound of the last line makes me see this tapering.

Best wishes
Ralf

2:45 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Angelika and Ralf.

7:57 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

nice one Bill i have a view of 'The Northern Range' where i live; quite an inspiration for me too

much love
gillena

12:20 PM  
Blogger John McDonald said...

yes nice one indeed Bill
john

12:34 AM  
Blogger Frank said...

Summer doesn't last long - nice haiku, Bill...

2:47 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Gillena, John, and Frank.

8:29 AM  
Blogger Magyar said...

Remarkably fitting! _m

4:22 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Doug. I just spent a week in the Berkshires, in northwestern Massachusetts, where, if you looked closely, the haiku way, you could see the signs I am talking about. The poem itself was written a while back and is based on earlier visits.

6:49 AM  
Blogger Alan Summers said...

Breaktakingly beautiful.

all my best,

Alan
The With Words International Online Haiku Competition 2010: With Words
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5:10 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Much appreciated, Alan. Thanks for the visit.

6:38 AM  

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