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Friday, September 25, 2009

hot

hot wind
the crow's shadow darker
than the crow

[First published in Notes from the Gean]

Entering a very busy period. I'll be taking a break from blogging for a while. See you around the end of October. Stay well, my friends.

15 Comments:

Blogger Dalloway said...

great haiku, Bill... I can smell the dust from here

5:30 PM  
Blogger Frank Williams said...

A very nice haiku Bill - have a good break...

9:19 AM  
Blogger Anonymous Poet said...

"Crow's shadow darker than the crow." I find that line very striking / haunting, for some reason.


Take care. Look forward to when you get back.

5:37 PM  
Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

very striking image, have a good break!

5:44 AM  
Anonymous Monika said...

Thank you for this one, Bill !

6:32 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, my friends. I'll be visiting you over the next few days.

3:52 PM  
Blogger Kristin Riggs said...

This is so clever. I love it...the image is so clear.

11:36 PM  
Blogger haiku-shelf said...

Very interesting!

10:44 AM  
Blogger Devika said...

Some great sets here, Bill...those which makes one think...always yours does,

Have a good break...and look forward to your joining back :)

wishes,
devika

10:17 PM  
Blogger Warren said...

Terrific, Bill - A very visual haiku and since it's about a crow, you know I love it.

1:39 PM  
Blogger Gene Murtha said...

well, take a break. I am here checking up on you. Thought something was wrong until I read your post. See you soon Bill.

8:17 PM  
Blogger Tikkis said...

cold October morning --
crow's shadow
shivers

,-)

11:31 AM  
Blogger Spanky said...

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8:49 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks for the comments. Just got back.

7:51 AM  
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