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Sunday, August 30, 2009

private

private beach
a seagull
rides the swells

[First published in White Lotus]

11 Comments:

Blogger Kristin Riggs said...

I guess no beach is ever completely private. I feel that way about my backyard sanctuary...just when I think I'm alone, the crickets and frogs quickly tell me otherwise. :)

Lovely poem!!!

2:48 PM  
Blogger Adelaide said...

It's hard to find a beach where only gulls are and no people. A lovely image of peace and beauty.

Adelaide

5:28 PM  
Blogger Devika said...

a free ride, or with toll...seems a fine place :)

wishes,
devika

6:55 PM  
Blogger John McDonald said...

nice movement Bill
john

12:53 AM  
Blogger gautami tripathy said...

I like the tranquility it brought into my mind..

1:58 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, my friends.

8:07 AM  
Blogger Magyar said...

I like it as it is, Bill!
_Too, I can read this with colloquial definitions, and gain a different perspective. Interesting! _m

3:51 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Ah, Doug, I'm glad you picked up the colloquial implications of "rides the swells." That's definitely intentional.

6:48 PM  
Blogger Juhani Tikkanen said...

I modified this from my notebook:

Watching
silent lake --
A gull: - SQUEEEeee!


(Sound from WikiAnswer.com.)

12:45 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

That sounds about right, tikkis.

10:36 AM  
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5:45 AM  

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