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Sunday, September 20, 2009

before it's written

dragonfly

[First published in Notes from the Gean]

Frank... said...: A lovely twist to this - nice one!; 5:48 AM
Magyar said...: dragonfly
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Lovit, John! _m; 11:00 AM
Monika said...: Having tried often myself to write about dragonflies, I very much like this one which seems to "seize" the "essence" of the dragonfly particularly well.; 12:06 PM
haiku-shelf (Angelika Wienert) said...: A good haiku!

Best wishes,
Angelika; 12:56 PM
Emma Dalloway said...: this is very good - confound that dragonfly!

(the word verfication is 'fookwad'... sounds like something out of Lewis Caroll); 4:32 PM
Kristin Riggs said...: Love this!!! I love those moments that are so small and so quick that they leave us asking, "Did that really happen?" So much poetry to be found in those moments, though, if we choose to reflect on them. I'm so glad that you do so. :)
-KR; 7:59 PM
BlueJayEye said...: a delicate beauty...; 10:00 AM
Gillena Cox said...: quick but haiku vibe was quicker

much love
gillena; 4:35 PM
Adelaide said...: I know that feeling and the frustration..the words come and go to fast to remember.

Adelaide; 5:43 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, everybody. I've been too busy (in the ways that only retired people can be) to keep up lately.; 6:39 AM
Tikkis said...: drag
on fly --
an unfinished hay(na)ku

ps. "haiku" in Finnish and also a kind of drag from a cigarette; 11:39 AM

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