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Sunday, September 20, 2009

gone

gone
before it's written
dragonfly

[First published in Notes from the Gean]

12 Comments:

Blogger Frank Williams said...

A lovely twist to this - nice one!

5:48 AM  
Blogger Magyar said...

dragonfly
... ... ... ... ...
... ...

Lovit, John! _m

11:00 AM  
Anonymous Monika said...

Having tried often myself to write about dragonflies, I very much like this one which seems to "seize" the "essence" of the dragonfly particularly well.

12:06 PM  
Blogger haiku-shelf said...

A good haiku!

Best wishes,
Angelika

12:56 PM  
Blogger Dalloway said...

this is very good - confound that dragonfly!

(the word verfication is 'fookwad'... sounds like something out of Lewis Caroll)

4:32 PM  
Blogger Kristin Riggs said...

Love this!!! I love those moments that are so small and so quick that they leave us asking, "Did that really happen?" So much poetry to be found in those moments, though, if we choose to reflect on them. I'm so glad that you do so. :)
-KR

7:59 PM  
Blogger BlueJayEye said...

a delicate beauty...

10:00 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

quick but haiku vibe was quicker

much love
gillena

4:35 PM  
Blogger Adelaide said...

I know that feeling and the frustration..the words come and go to fast to remember.

Adelaide

5:43 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, everybody. I've been too busy (in the ways that only retired people can be) to keep up lately.

6:39 AM  
Blogger Tikkis said...

drag
on fly --
an unfinished hay(na)ku

ps. "haiku" in Finnish and also a kind of drag from a cigarette

11:39 AM  
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5:43 AM  

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