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Wednesday, January 30, 2008

last bus

last bus
the driver
whistling softly


Blogger josh said...

Lotsa space left to fill in our own story. I'm getting an end-of-shift light-heartedness.

Nice one, Bill.

4:09 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Josh. Yes, the ku is as open to interpretation as the moment was.

9:17 PM  
Blogger floots said...

thoughts on mortality for me
suprisingly pleasant ones
to whistle gently into that good night
(as dylan thomas almost said) :)
is not a bad idea
thanks bill

6:54 AM  
Blogger polona said...

i like the way it can take me in different directions (literally and metaphorically), too

12:04 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

A sensitive and imaginative reading, floots.

Yes, polona,I'm seeing that in the responses I'm getting here and elsewhere.

Thanks, both.

8:02 PM  
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6:29 AM  

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