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Thursday, June 14, 2007

stranger

summer dusk
a stranger and I
share the path

13 Comments:

Blogger Masago said...

...a deeper metaphor at work here. Good one, Bill.

6:53 AM  
Anonymous aurora said...

Very nice, Bill.

7:17 AM  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

A perfect place to meet, betwixt and between.

8:48 AM  
Blogger Dana-Maria Onica said...

He really might be a stranger, or not. It might be a summer dusk or a friendship dusk, the life dusk...

A deep bow to you, Bill.

9:43 PM  
Blogger Blue Sky said...

Interesting. Somehow I think the feeling that the other is a stranger ends there. :)

9:16 AM  
Blogger Collin said...

Nice one, Bill! I suppose this one could apply to me and my wife (only joking).

Enjoyed!

9:50 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, all.

A chance encounter and an echo of Basho's

no one walks
this path but me-
autumn evening

one of my favorites.

We are alone.

We are together.

Two truths we have trouble holding in our minds at the same time.

blue sky, glad to meet you. I'm adding a link to your main blog.

11:06 AM  
Blogger Tikkis said...

at night
a path --
very alone

Ps. Thanks abt Basho!

11:38 AM  
Blogger polona said...

oh, i love this one!

2:48 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

tikkis and polona, my thanks.

7:35 PM  
Blogger floots said...

beautifully done

10:17 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, floots.

4:29 PM  
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6:49 AM  

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