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Sunday, June 10, 2007


summer rain
wind chimes


Anonymous aurora said...

Quietly effective, Bill. Or should that read, Effectively quiet? :)

4:51 PM  
Blogger Masago said...

Beautiful one!

8:36 PM  
Blogger polona said...

love the mood this creates

1:56 PM  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

Does create a wonderfully calm mood, serene mood.

4:38 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

As usual, Bill, I admire your technique: I like very much the diminuendo of the sounds.

12:10 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, guys. Yes, the sound was so faint that a verb would have been too emphatic a gesture.

4:22 PM  
Blogger Masago said...

No verb (what about "chimes"?). :-)

6:54 PM  
Blogger floots said...

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11:06 AM  
Blogger floots said...

sorry - typo :)
i too love the softness
(better than dickens with his "hard chimes") :)

11:08 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Good point, Vaughn. It's true "chimes" can be read as a verb, with "wind" as its subject. I hoped some readers would pick that up. I was referring to the absence of a verb if "chimes" is read as a noun. And thank you, floots.

7:02 PM  
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6:49 AM  

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