haiku-usa

A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

Haiku is to poetry as espresso is to coffee.

Friday, March 31, 2006

a seagull's cry

piercing the haze

J. Andrew Lockhart said...: I can almost hear it! :); 10:51 PM
Bill said...: Thanks, Andrew. that' the kind of thing a writer wants to hear.; 9:48 AM
Masago said...: Interesting juxtaposition of sound & sight. Effective.

P.S. Having each line centered gives your entries a different "feel".; 8:01 PM
Bill said...: Thanks, Vaughn. That juxtaposition was the main thing for me.

Yes, my ku feel different to me depending on how they're arranged. In my head, I think they are almost always centered, but they don't show up that way at workshops and other locations.; 10:02 AM
polona said...: i like this ku... almost wish i'd written it!; 1:15 PM
Bill said...: That's quite a compliment, polona. Thanks; 1:22 PM
floots said...: i'm with j. andrew
i'll be listening on this misty scottish morning; 12:11 AM
Bill said...: That's good to know, floots.; 5:09 AM