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Friday, June 03, 2005

pale flutter

pale flutter
by the edge of sight
butterfly

9 Comments:

Blogger martin said...

spring field
the crow pecks at its shadow

8:53 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Martin: Good one. thanks for sharing it.

9:15 AM  
Blogger Alice: In Wonderland or Not said...

I enjoy this one.

2:13 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, alice.

5:46 PM  
Blogger floots said...

"by the edge of sight" is a phrase which gets it so right. It's not what I expected and that helps me to capture the moment as fresh.

1:02 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Floots. Th haiku almost wrote itself on the spot.

7:01 AM  
Blogger martin said...

La Guardia
moths and wild flowers
on the tarmac

10:50 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Nice Urban-ku, Martin.

3:09 PM  
Blogger indonesianegriku said...

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7:42 AM  

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