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A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

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Haiku is to poetry as espresso is to coffee.

Wednesday, March 30, 2005

ant

on a bare surface
an ant changes direction—
what does the ant know

5 Comments:

Blogger floots said...

I love the ambiguity of this last line.

8:13 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks. It wasn't until I had written the line that I began to see how much is in the question. I'm not taking credit for it. As a poet, you know what I mean when I say the line is something that happened to me.

9:21 AM  
Anonymous Kris said...

I like your writing. Thanks for sharing it via a blog.
Kris

6:34 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks for dropping in and for your comments. The hope of getting comments, criticism, suggestions was one of my motives for setting up the blog.

4:28 PM  
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