haiku-usa

A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

Haiku is to poetry as espresso is to coffee.

Wednesday, March 30, 2005

on a bare surface

an ant changes direction—

what does the ant know

floots said...: I love the ambiguity of this last line.; 8:13 AM
Bill said...: Thanks. It wasn't until I had written the line that I began to see how much is in the question. I'm not taking credit for it. As a poet, you know what I mean when I say the line is something that happened to me.; 9:21 AM
Anonymous said...: I like your writing. Thanks for sharing it via a blog.
Kris; 6:34 PM
Bill said...: Thanks for dropping in and for your comments. The hope of getting comments, criticism, suggestions was one of my motives for setting up the blog.; 4:28 PM