haiku-usa: fear

Sunday, September 10, 2017

clothing optional
my fear of water
and women

First published Failed Haiku

Magyar said...: WOW !!
__ So good to see your work, Bill! My guess is, the Summer chaos has seeped toward the minimal, and all is well_?

troubled
a walk down this beach
my cane sinks

Smiles, Bill!; 4:30 PM
Adelaide said...: I know that fear. At my age, clothing is obligatory.

Adelaide; 6:53 PM
Anonymous said...: got that loose feeling them gendai (modern) verses over at blue willow is known for. I figure the trick is not just write "modern Lit" rehashed, or rely on anthropomorphism or surreal notions. Has to say something, or feel something as ol' JEC might profess to: "if it sounds right, it is right!"

He drank a lot of Sunshine, too. That brew made in that Lancashire joint he used to haunt, I mean. Wasted on me. I was stuck on whether the place was a bar or a tavern. He took that secret to the grave ...

Mama used to say , "inexplicable is as inexplicable does." Din' yor'n?

An honest to goodness allusion don't hurt none, neither. ;-]; 8:59 PM
Bill said...: Hey, William, good to hear from you. Where would we be without Mama?

What's the right way to pronounce "inexplicable"?; 12:41 PM
Bill said...: M and Adelaide, just found these. Thank you thank you; 8:03 AM

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